Psalm 119 - Part 20 Grammar

רְאֵה עָנְיִי וְחַלְּצֵנִי כִּי תוֹרָתְךָ לֹא שָׁכָחְתִּי	Regard my affliction and deliver me for your teaching I do not forget
רִיבָה רִיבִי וּגְאָלֵנִ לְאִמְרָתְךָ חַיֵּנִי	Reason my reason and redeem me in your promise give me life
רָחוֹק מֵרְשָׁעִים יְשׁוּעָה כִּי חֻקֶּיךָ לֹא דָרָשׁוּ	Remote is salvation from the wicked for your statutes they do not seek
רַחֲמֶיךָ רַבִּים יְהוָה כְּמִשְׁפָּטֶיךָ חַיֵּנִי	Rich are your mercies יְהוָה by your judgments give me life
רַבִּים רֹדְפַי וְצָרָי מֵעֵדְו‍ֹתֶיךָ לֹא נָטִיתִי	Running after me are my many troublers from your testimonies I do not waver
רָאִיתִי בֹגְדִים וָאֶתְקוֹטָטָה אֲשֶׁר אִמְרָתְךָ לֹא שָׁמָרוּ	Regarded I transgressors and I was distressed that your promise they disregard
רְאֵה כִּי פִקּוּדֶיךָ אָהָבְתִּי יְהוָה כְּחַסְדְּךָ חַיֵּנִי	Regard how I love your precepts יְהוָה in your loving kindness give me life
רֹאשׁ דְּבָרְךָ אֱמֶת וּלְעוֹלָם כָּל מִשְׁפַּט צִדְקֶךָ	Right away your word is truth and for ever is every judgment of your righteousness

R has at least the benefit of many words in English.There are three pleas for life in part 20. They are all at the end of a colon - why should English poetry change their place? (In my prior versions I smoothed out the English. There was in these cases no need to do this. There was no need to do this in these cases. In these cases to do this there was no need. No need was there in these cases this to do. Seven cola end with action in the Hebrew. Since we all share the same linear time, seven English cola should with action also end. The ending actions follow a pattern: I - give me life - then - give me life - I - they - give me life - you.

Details

r)éh `anyy	רְאֵה עָנְיִי	Regard my affliction	qal imperative+singular noun with first person singular possessive pronoun affix
vxàlcény	וְחַלְּצֵנִי	and deliver me	connecting conjunction+qal imperative+object pronoun
ky tvoratka	כִּי תוֹרָתְךָ	for your instruction	conjunction+singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix
lo)	לֹא	not	negative particle
shakaxty	שָׁכָחְתִּי	do I forget	qal perfect first person
rybah	רִיבָה	reason	qal imperative
ryby	רִיבִי	my reason	singular noun with first person singular possessive pronoun affix
vug)alény	וּגְאָלֵנִי	and redeem me	connector+qal imperative+object pronoun
l)imratka	לְאִמְרָתְךָ	in your promise	preposition+singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix
xàyény	חַיֵּנִי	give me life	piel imperative+object pronoun
raxvoq	רָחוֹק	remote	adjective
mérsha`ym	מֵרְשָׁעִים	from the wicked	preposition+plural noun
yshvu`ah	יְשׁוּעָה	is salvation	noun
ky	כִּי	for	conjunction
xuqeyka	חֻקֶּיךָ	your statutes	plural noun with second person possessive pronoun
lo) darashvu	לֹא דָרָשׁוּ	they do not seek	negative particle+third person qal perfect
ràxameyka	רַחֲמֶיךָ	your mercies	plural noun with second person possessive pronoun
ràbym	רַבִּים	are rich (great /...)	plural adjective
yy	יְהוָה	O LORD	divine name
kmishpa+eyka	כְּמִשְׁפָּטֶיךָ	by your judgments	preposition+plural noun with second person possessive pronoun
xàyény	חַיֵּנִי	give me life	piel imperative+object pronoun
ràbym	רַבִּים	are many	plural adjective
rodpày	רֹדְפַי	runners after me (my persecutors)	participle with first person possessive pronoun
vcaray	וְצָרָי	and my troublers	conjunction+plural noun with first person possessive pronoun
mé`édvoteyka	מֵעֵדְו‍ֹתֶיךָ	from your testimonies	preposition+plural noun with second person possessive pronoun
lo)	לֹא	not	negative particle
na+yty	נָטִיתִי	do I waver	qal perfect first person
ra)yty	רָאִיתִי	regarded I	qal perfect first person
bogdym	בֹגְדִים	transgressors	plural noun
va)etqvo+a+ah	וָאֶתְקוֹטָטָה	and I was distressed	hithpolel imperfect note the double tet! And the extra taf in the prefix
)asher	אֲשֶׁר	that	relative pronoun
)imratka	אִמְרָתְךָ	your promise	singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix
lo) shamarvu	לֹא שָׁמָרוּ	they disregard	negative particle+third person qal perfect
r)éh	רְאֵה	regard	imperative
ky piqvudeyka	כִּי פִקּוּדֶיךָ	for your precepts	conjunction + plural noun with second person possessive pronoun
)ahabty	אָהָבְתִּי	I love	first person qal perfect - note how many of these I have rendered as continuing present
yy	יְהוָה	O LORD	divine name
kxàsdka	כְּחַסְדְּךָ	by your loving kindness	preposition+singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix
xàyény	חַיֵּנִי	give me life	third time this request - pronoun affixed as object
ro)sh dbarka	רֹאשׁ דְּבָרְךָ	right away your word	noun in construct + singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix
)emet	אֱמֶת	is truth	noun predicate - implied copula
vul`volam	וּלְעוֹלָם	and for ever	connector + preposition+noun - why move it in the sentence?
kal mishpà+	כָּל מִשְׁפַּט	every judgment of	adjective+noun
cidqka	צִדְקֶךָ	your righteousness	singular noun with second person singular possessive pronoun affix