Psalm 119 - Part 9 Grammar

Too well you have dealt with your servant יְהוָה through your word Teach me good taste and discernment for I have believed in your commandments Time it was I was afflicted going astray but now I have kept your promise Too good are you and doing good teach me your statutes Those proud ones smear a lie against me with a whole heart I will observe your precepts Their heart is gross as fat I will delight in your teaching `Tis good for me that I was afflicted so I would learn your statutes The law of your mouth is better to me than thousands of gold and silver

טוֹב עָשִׂיתָ עִם עַבְדְּךָ   יְהוָה כִּדְבָרֶךָ טוּב טַעַם וָדַעַת לַמְּדֵנִי   כִּי בְמִצְו‍ֹתֶיךָ הֶאֱמָנְתִּי טֶרֶם אֶעֱנֶה אֲנִי שֹׁגֵג וְעַתָּה אִמְרָתְךָ שָׁמָרְתִּי טוֹב אַתָּה וּמֵטִיב   לַמְּדֵנִי חֻקֶּיךָ טָפְלוּ עָלַי שֶׁקֶר זֵדִים   אֲנִי בְּכָל לֵב אֶצֹּר פִּקּוּדֶיךָ טָפַשׁ כַּחֵלֶב לִבָּם   אֲנִי תּוֹרָתְךָ שִׁעֲשָׁעְתִּי טוֹב לִי כִי עֻנֵּיתִי   לְמַעַן אֶלְמַד חֻקֶּיךָ טוֹב לִי תוֹרַת פִּיךָ   מֵאַלְפֵי זָהָב וָכָסֶף

What do you think about writing poetry like this in Hebrew? Could you improve on words beginning with ט and not use the same word in five of eight lines? But the sense of redemption is particularly strong in these verses. The poet knows personally how affliction produced unexpected positive results. One wonders, however, if good intentions and promises will have their follow-through. The acrostic seems child-like.

Details

+vob	טוֹב	Too well	Well, I had to have T to begin. Tov as adverb
`asyta	עָשִׂיתָ	you have dealt	Second person singular perfect (if it's qal or piel I won't always mention it.)
`im `àbdka	עִם עַבְדְּךָ	with your servant	preposition + singular noun with possessive pronoun
yy	יְהוָה	O LORD	now this is vocative but the O is not needed with a name
kidbareka	כִּדְבָרֶךָ	through your word	preposition + singular noun with possessive pronoun
+vub	טוּב	good	Tov as adjective
+à`àm	טַעַם	taste	noun
vadà`àt	וָדַעַת	and discernment	conjunction + noun
làmdény	לַמְּדֵנִי	Teach me	imperative with object
ky	כִּי	for	conjunction
bmicvoteyka	בְמִצְו‍ֹתֶיךָ	in your commandments	preposition + plural noun + possessive pronoun
he)emanty	הֶאֱמָנְתִּי	have I believed	Hiphil perfect
+erem	טֶרֶם	time it was	temporal adverb
)e`neh	אֶעֱנֶה	afflicted was	first person imperfect
)any	אֲנִי	I	first person stand-alone  pronoun
shogég	שֹׁגֵג	going astray	participle
v`àtah	וְעַתָּה	but now	conjunction + time marker
)imratka	אִמְרָתְךָ	your promise	noun + possessive pronoun - more to say here
shamarty	שָׁמָרְתִּי	I have kept	first person perfect - corrected from an earlier error in this post
+vob )àtah	טוֹב אַתָּה	Too good are you	Tov as adjective + second person singular stand alone pronoun
vumé+yb	וּמֵטִיב	and doing good	Tov as verb
làmdény	לַמְּדֵנִי	teach me	imperative with first person object pronoun
xuqeyka	חֻקֶּיךָ	your statutes	plural noun with possessive pronoun
+aplvu	טָפְלוּ	they smear	third person perfect
`alày	עָלַי	against me	preposition + object pronoun
sheqr	שֶׁקֶר	a lie	noun
zédym	זֵדִים	those proud ones	plural subject of preceding verb
)any	אֲנִי	I	stand-alone pronoun
bkal léb	בְּכָל לֵב	with full heart	preposition with adjective and noun
)ecor	אֶצֹּר	will observe	first person imperfect
piqvudeyka	פִּקּוּדֶיךָ	your precepts	plural noun and possessive pronoun
+apàsh	טָפַשׁ	too gross	I don't need the t here - this is a verb reflecting the state of their heart - likely not a compliment. Note the singular heart but plural pronoun.
kàxéleb	כַּחֵלֶב	as fat	comparative preposition + adjective
libam	לִבָּם	their heart	singular noun with possessive
)any	אֲנִי	I	stand-alone pronoun
tvoratka	תּוֹרָתְךָ	in your instruction	the 'in' in English does not represent a Hebrew preposition but perhaps should be seen as part of the gloss for the verb that follows
shi`asha`ty	שִׁעֲשָׁעְתִּי	will delight	pilpel ? perfect with root letters slipping around and doubling! If I find a reference for this, I will post it.
+vob ly	טוֹב לִי	`tis good for me	Tov as state in verbless clause
ky `unéyty	כִי עֻנֵּיתִי	that I was afflicted	the conjunction is perhaps stronger than a relative - read 'that' perhaps as 'because' - but that's why I needed the contraction for the T.
lmà`àn	לְמַעַן	so	coordinating conjunction - therefore / in order that. I wonder if the long conjunction instead of a vav is for scansion?
)elmàd	אֶלְמַד	I will learn	first person imperfect - could be translated as modal
xuqeyka	חֻקֶּיךָ	your statutes	plural noun with possessive pronoun
+vob ly	טוֹב לִי	to me better is	Tov as comparative in verbless clause - see the mem below
tvoràt pyka	תוֹרַת פִּיךָ	the law of your mouth	construct chain
mé)àlpéy	מֵאַלְפֵי	than thousands of	signal of comparative with plural noun beginning construct chain
zahab	זָהָב	gold	end of another construct chain
vakaseph	וָכָסֶף	and silver	well - not quite the end of it since both these nouns are involved as a unit in English.